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Becoming Forsaken Part Two - An Excerpt

JD's Daily Writes 18 Nov 24

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James Armstrong
Nov 18, 2024
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“I think you know who I am.”

Kaelen and the stranger had not broken eye contact.  Yet Kaelen heard his voice clearly in his head. 

Kaelen stared at the stranger sitting smugly in his chair.  Kaelen stepped forward and growled, the hairs on his neck standing on end as he did so.  He might not feel a threat from this stranger, but he was irritated by him.

“So you’re the voice in my head.  The person who has been watching me.  That doesn’t tell me JACK about WHO you are!” 

The stranger smiled and casually cleaned under his fingernails. 

“Sit down, boy.”

Kaelen found himself sitting on the carpet in his living room in the blink of an eye.

“What the hell!” he exclaimed, about to rise to his feet.

The stranger jumped up suddenly, towering over Kaelen.

“STAY!”

Read Part One of Becoming Forsaken.

Part Two of Becoming Forsaken will be published soon at JD on T2.World.

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